Here Goes!

I'm new to the group. I have posted a thread and got good response. So here
goes.....
Been playing for a while. Still feel like a turd stuck in the drain. I
really need some honest opinions regarding my playing. I'm up for any
criticisms. Lay it on me! I'm not trying to plug my band. (for God's sakes.
listen to the mix and my sound!) Our best demo IMO is Stolen Moments (remix)

My beef would be the tone.
You definately have a tone that's all you. The problem is it doesn't
seem to fit the style of songs your group does. It has "P-Bass with a
pick" quality to it. It's definately unique. I am wondering if you have
flats on it maybe. It's not bad. it just seems out of place.